I could say I am following the movie and beg the question, but that is Not On. So...hmm, I suspect the easiest solution would just be to remove the word "veterans'" and call it good. Because this isn't even the damn story.
I think the weave of the net is fairly solid, but of course I am not necessarily the best judge of that, and I have sworn off info-dumping in-text to the best of my ability. So there will probably be a very long meta-post about the worldbuilding itself here at some point.
Anyway, glad it piqued your interest, and thank you for the comment!
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Date: 2010-05-09 02:42 (UTC)I think the weave of the net is fairly solid, but of course I am not necessarily the best judge of that, and I have sworn off info-dumping in-text to the best of my ability. So there will probably be a very long meta-post about the worldbuilding itself here at some point.
Anyway, glad it piqued your interest, and thank you for the comment!