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[01]
Days covered in regrets and humiliation

Someday it will come

Believe in that time alone...


Chapitre 203: Those By Your Side

[02]
Mokona: You were like that
Up until we met in Tokyo...

Jr.: ...I was at his base.

Until I reached the age when I turned back time.

[03]
FX: Suden

Mokona: ...Shaoran.

Jr.: ...But even so,
My sin will not disappear.

My wish gave birth to a distortion,

Due to that distortion,
Various things had their paths changed.

[04]
Fai: That is...


Jr.: You too.

Within time before it was rewound,
You might not have been born as twins.

[05]
Jr.: Your mother as well.

[06]
Jr.: She might not have died in that manner.

Your father as well...

[07]
Mokona: That can't be...!

Jr.: Fei Wong said it then.

"It's the same as you did, isn't it?"

In order to grant my own wish,
I broke a taboo.

So

[08]
Jr.: Please choose.

About hereafter.

[09]
Kurogane: .....

Mokona: Kurogane!!

NO!!

[10]
FX: Menacing

[11]
Kurogane: ...Hmph.

FX: Abruptly

FX: Secretly

FX: Jazz hands

Fai: We've chosen.

So,
Here.

FX: Jazz hands

[12]
Fai: Kuro-sama, Since he is, surprisingly, a kid.

Kurogane: What?

FX: Turning

Jr.: I...

Fai: You saw Shaoran-kun's sorrowful face earlier and got pouty.

Kurogane: ....

Fai: Were you thinking that when we knew about the time that was rewound,

We'd want to part from you?

[13]
Fai: Certainly you did transgress a taboo.

But

Not everything that happened due to that is your fault.
In a way, to try to shoulder that burden yourself is hubris.

[14]
Jr.: ....

Fai: This has plunged you
Into self-admonition, huh?

Kurogane: If the same thing had happened, and I was told to choose,

I would choose too, I think.

If I could protect
What I'd decided to protect.

[15]
Fay: ...Me too.

Thank you for talking about those difficult things.

[16]
Fay: But because you were a bit of a bad child,
You got a bit of a pounding from Daddy.
From me,
This.

FX: Gently

FX: Kiss

Mokona: Then, then, from Mokona too!

You know,

Shaoran, Mokona loves you.

[17]
Jr.: ...Thank...you.

[18]
Fai: You're pouting again.

FX: Miffed

Kurogane: Who is?

Mokona: You are pouting.
Your mouth's making a letter へ. [TN: Pronounced "hay."]

FX: Bounce

Kurogane: No it's not.

Fai: Now that you mention it, it's always that way.

Jr.: At my side are

People who can
Accept my being here like this.

[19]
Jr.: They're certainly at your side too.

A wish that you won't disappear--

For their sake, you yourself --
Those who can wish that they don't want to disappear--

[20]
Jr.: So don't disappear.

I too will do what I can in order to grant my wish.

In order to move forward the time that I turned back and stopped.


                                                                         
It's late and I'm not going to put in any more effort trying to make one coherent sentence out of the second panel on p. 19. It's disjointed in the original anyway.

Anyway, super-cute bro-love on display towards the end here. Mokona is the only girl left in the group at this point. And confirmation of what we already suspected: that they are going to restart time, or try to do so. Anyone ever read The Worm Ouroboros? It's kind of like that.

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Date: 2008-10-31 15:54 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ariadnechan.livejournal.com
thank you very much!!!
i love this chapter!! fay is so beatifull and the family interaction!!!!