starlady: (fujimoto)
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It's going to be one of those days. Bring it on, world.

!!! page 01
FX: Plop

Ioryogi: Were you singing so that he wouldn't notice? 

Kobato: ...Yes.

Ioryogi: Lean over.

Kobato: ...Huh?
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!!! page 02
Ioryogi: Bring your head here.
Lean over.

FX: Occasionally

Kobato: Oh--yes.

FX: Pat

Ioryogi: It's fine not to speak if you don't want to speak,
But say it if you want to say it.
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!!! page 03
Kobato: Ioryogi-san.

FX: Plopping down

Ioryogi: ...Hmph.

Kobato: Thank you very much.
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!!! page 04
Drop 14: After the Rain
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!!! page 05
FX: Plip plop

FX: Clouds rolling away

Kobato: ...Then, I thought that it was awful that Fujimoto-san
was in pain.

I thought...
That strongly.
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!!! page 06
Kobato: I don't know why,
But...

Ioryogi: I wonder
What you'll do when you understand.
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!!! page 07
Ioryogi: If wishes increase, doubts increase too.

Besides...
There's not much time left.

...Kobato.
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!!! page 08
Ginsei: ...Do you understand?

If
You do not grant that girl's wish,
You will not be able to go back again.
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!!! page 09
Ginsei: ...Iorogi.
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!!! page 10
Kobato: Overslept--!!

FX: Bam

Ioryogi: I woke you.

Kobato: But,
But,
I didn't notice at all!

FX: Running steps

Ioryogi: Then I'll put my hand in your mouth like this--

FX: When you swallow like this--

FX: Running steps

Kobato: I woke up before that!

Ioryogi: Yeah, just a bit more, and it'd have been like this--
It seemed like you were going to swallow--

Kobato: Please wake me normally--!
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!!! page 11
Kobato: Oh...

Fujimoto-sa...
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!!! page 12
FX: Slipping away

Kobato: Augh--

FX: Trip!

Ioryogi: I've had enough of this promise already--
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!!! page 13
FX: Catch

Blondie: You all right?
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!!! page 14
Kobato: ...Fujimoto-san.

FX: Whip around

Blondie: Wait, Kiyokazu.

Kobato: Huh? 

(no subject)

Date: 2009-05-17 18:03 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mikayukixx.livejournal.com
Thanks for the translation!
What a interesting chapter....♥

(no subject)

Date: 2009-05-17 18:14 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jlarinda.livejournal.com
Thanks for the translation!

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Date: 2009-05-17 21:13 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mairenn-k.livejournal.com
Thanks a lot for translating!

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Date: 2009-05-18 02:36 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laury-kos.livejournal.com
thank you!!!!
can't wait for next chapter!!! :D

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Date: 2009-05-18 16:40 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cannedsardines.livejournal.com
Heyy...at page 08, didn't Ginsei said "If...that little girl's wish is not granted...you will not be able to go back."

Pardon me, but can you please check?

(no subject)

Date: 2009-05-18 21:58 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starlady38.livejournal.com
Hey! No problem.

I did look at it again (and this was the challenge line of the chapter), and upon consideration I'm going to change it to "If/you do not grant that girl's wish/you won't be able to go back again." This is a comparatively unusual subordinate sense of もう as "again," imo, since as you pointed out, it doesn't really make sense as "already."
Edited Date: 2009-05-19 01:00 (UTC)

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Date: 2009-05-19 09:49 (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Yeah, commonly it's you cannot go back anymore.

(And by common, I mean very common "You cannot go back~you cannot go back~tra-la-la-la~you cannot go back~")

*cough* Thanks a lot for taking the trouble to go over it again.

Thank you so much!!!!

Date: 2009-05-18 23:10 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] khinkhun14789.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!!

(no subject)

Date: 2009-05-19 08:15 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tiljaunique.livejournal.com
Thank you very much for the translation!

Now I want to know about those human shadows. Who can they be really?

(no subject)

Date: 2009-05-19 21:58 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starlady38.livejournal.com
[livejournal.com profile] chibiyuuto and others (including myself) think that the shadows are the angels' true (i.e. non-plushie) forms.

(no subject)

Date: 2009-05-21 23:22 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tiljaunique.livejournal.com
Yes, that's what I thought. I was wondering more if anyone has any inkling as to how they look like. Do they resemble any known character by those shadows? Can anyone tell?

(no subject)

Date: 2009-05-22 01:36 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starlady38.livejournal.com
I've never finished Wish, so I couldn't say--but if there are any resemblances, I think it would have to be to Wish characters, since there's been some crossover, and one of the angel characters in that manga got name-checked a few drops ago.

(no subject)

Date: 2009-05-23 08:17 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tiljaunique.livejournal.com
I read all of Whish but I can't recognize any character in those shadows. None of them had those kind of clothes for one, not even the demons, so I can't see any resemblance with any character in there. That's why I ask if anyone sees anything.

(no subject)

Date: 2009-05-23 14:06 (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
What I find most odd is Fujimoto's response to the whole scene, hmmm. Maybe he's avoiding Kobato because he knows her feelings?

(no subject)

Date: 2009-05-23 15:41 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starlady38.livejournal.com
I think he just has ANGST in general.

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