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Back from Portland and back to the grind, bird on my knee and the wind at my back.

!!! page 01
Shaoran: We will not

Choose that future.

Sakura: What we will choose
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!!! page 02
Shaoran: Is a world in which we can exist together.

Sakura: For that purpose,

Shaoran: Without losing any one of the four of us,
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!!! page 03
Group: We'll get out of here!

FX: BOOM
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!!! page 04
FWR: Fools!

FX: Crack

Snap

FWR: If you have magic,
You should understand that you can't get out of there!

FX: Creaking
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!!! page 05
FX: Snap

Crack

FX: Nod

Nod

FX: Slow movement

Quickly & smoothly
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!!! page 06-07
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!!! page 08
FWR: It can't be!!

FX: Snap

Crack

FX: Slow movement

Sakura: The power that is within us

Is the power to cross spacetime.
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!!! page 09
FWR: You intend to use that power and to get out of there!!

Sakura: It's a power that we alone can use.

FX: Strong light

FWR: Stop!

I didn't cause that power to be stored up to use it for something like that!
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!!! page 10
FX: Slicing air

FX: Ba-bam
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!!! page 11
FX: Steaming

Stagger

FX: Sudden

Crackle crackle

Ba-bam
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!!! page 12
FX: Menacing atmosphere

FWR: Even if you get out of there,
The principle is already broken!

With you breaking that, the principle will be even more disordered!

FX: Snap

Crack

Snap

FWR: You cannot go back to the origin! No, spacetime will collapse further!!
Your existences will be sent back to nothing too!!
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!!! page 13
Shaoran: Even so we will advance forward.

Shaoran: Rather than stop, I choose to proceed.
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!!! page 14
Shaoran: Since I believe

Sakura: In everyone.

FX: Crack


I have cleverly solved the "who's on first" problem by not differentiating. I honestly can't tell the difference any more, and I'm not sure it matters at the moment.

Oh FWR, so smart, but still so dumb.

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Date: 2009-09-03 03:16 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starlady38.livejournal.com
Well, I do think our heroes are going to survive, though at this point I think everyone else surviving is very much up in the air. And I very much think you're right that the universe will take care of itself--I think FWR's key mistake is that he assumes that he has to (and has the right to) interfere in the order of things, when the order of things was going along just fine without him.

As I was saying to [livejournal.com profile] chibiyuuto, it's definitely time to put these two series to bed, awesome as they are. Hopefully both of them will be finished by the end of the year; as you say, they've totally been dragging.

In some ways I almost don't like reading the chapters as they come out; it's much more engaging to read the tankoubon than to have to keep waiting weeks, sometimes, between these short updates.