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Am obscurely pleased to be drinking a good cup of coffee right now. Let's get to it.

!!! page 01
Princess.: No.

That you two were captured, and will be made to separate again,
Is just like the future I saw in the dream.

Chapitre 228: Overlapping Emotions.
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!!! page 02
Sakura Sr.: How is that...

Princess Sakura: Since I was seeing,
Always, even when I was within stopped time, through you--

What you saw.

Sakura Sr.: !

Jr.: Why did you take her hand!?
Knowing that you'd be caught up...
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!!! page 03
Shaoran Sr.: Because she knew!

Princess Sakura: So I understand
Just how much you care for us.
But--

Shaoran Sr.: I told you, didn't I?

That your existence was precious to me.
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!!! page 04
Shaoran Sr.: The same goes for me.

Sakura Sr.: The same goes for me.
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!!! page 05
Sakura Sr.: Certainly it's difficult to change the things we saw in dreams.
But--

FX: Howling wind

FWR: You damned clones!

I'll smash that to pieces!

Kurogane: They'll--!
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!!! page 06
FX: Bang

FX: Vong (strong magic)

Fai: I know!

FX: Roar
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!!! page 07
FX: Roar

FX: Whoosh

Fai: !?

FX: Blaze

FWR: I said you're in the way!!
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!!! page 08
FX: Bang

Mokona: Augh!

FX: BLAZE
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!!! page 09
FX: Whap whap whap whap...

Mokona: That's the same as was at Yuuko's...

...that Clow made.
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!!! page 10
FWR: Regarding those I dragged into this without their permission,

You can't break it!
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!!! page 11
FX: Rumble

FWR: You damned clones!!

FX: Rumble

FWR: From this world--
No,
I'll erase you from every dimension!

FX: Rumble
Rumble
Roaring
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!!! page 12-13
Kurogane: DON'T

FX: Roar

Fai: TOUCH THEM!

FX: Blaze
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!!! page 14
FX: Crunch

FX: Wheezing

SSSS: !!
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!!! page 15
Mokona: Fai! 
Kurogane!
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!!! page 16
Sakura Sr.: Changing what we saw in dreams

Princess Sakura: Is difficult, but

Jr.: If we are with those people

Shaoran Sr.: Who journeyed with us,

All: We can change the future.

Re: not so clear!

Date: 2009-08-26 00:02 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starlady38.livejournal.com
Well, to take things in opposite order...

You're right that I did flub FWR's line. It will shortly read

>FWR: Regarding those I dragged into this without their permission,
>You can't break it!

The thing they are trying to say is that they all are very important people to each other.
(Like saying "I love you too")


Yup. I may change Shaoran Sr.'s preceding line to exactly quote his line from 226.


Okay, I just looked at 227 again (minor confession: I generally don't reread preceding chapters before translating the new chapter), and you're right, it is Princess Sakura who has those lines. I shall change them.

Re: not so clear!

Date: 2009-08-26 00:54 (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Do not worry, nothing makes sense in tsubasa anyway and they change perspective. At the end of 227 princess sakura is the one on the left. Then in 228 she is the one on the right O_o

I too had to reread 227 to figure out who was who. It is a very confusing and cryptic text you are tranlating and we all thank you for it. Keep up the good work.